Here’s a screen grab of some of the revision notes from my editor for Ten Commandments for Kissing Gloria Jean. While not an insurmountable challenge, addressing all of the concerns and shaping the novel to be the best it could be was certainly a hard effort.

From just one page, not even halfway through!
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